Thursday, July 18, 2019
Compare and Contrast Poems ââ¬ËStill I Riseââ¬â¢ and ââ¬ËI Shall Returnââ¬â¢ Essay
The poems I am comparing and contrasting are ââ¬ËStill I Riseââ¬â¢ and ââ¬ËI Shall Return.ââ¬â¢ The main similarity between these poems is to do with the theme. They both talk about confidence and mental strength. The poets both have had very different upbringings, but have both been depressed at one point in their lives. The woman who wrote ââ¬ËStill I Riseââ¬â¢, Maya Angelou, was born in Saint Louis. Maya was sent to live with her grandmother after she was raped by her motherââ¬â¢s boyfriend. Soon after, she moved to San Francisco, to try to forget about her troubled childhood. She wrote the bestseller ââ¬Å"I Know Why the Cage Bird Singsâ⬠as she travelled, and can now speak fluently in lots of languages. ââ¬ËStill I Riseââ¬â¢ is based on Mayaââ¬â¢s childhood; being treated unfairly, but still coming back with confidence. The other poet was a man, Claude McKay, who was born in Jamaica. He moved to America and founded ââ¬ËAfrican blood brothers.ââ¬â¢ Shortly after, he moved to London where he died of a heart attack. His poem, ââ¬ËI Shall Returnââ¬â¢ shows he wanted other people to be grateful for what they had, and to show he had happier times in his childhood. Also, itââ¬â¢s the start of your life; the only time you can control your future, which is a very important thing in this poem as I feel he wishes that he could have stayed in the happy place of his childhood, and that it could have changed his whole life. The way he talks about his recent pain ââ¬Å"To ease my mind of long, long years of painâ⬠and the way he uses repetition emphasises the fact he couldnââ¬â¢t get away from the pain. ââ¬ËStill I riseââ¬â¢ is about Maya Angelouââ¬â¢s history. When you read the poem, you feel she has had a bad past, even if you do not know anything about her. The main themes in the poem are about discrimination, and being ill-treated but still coming across as the stronger one. She repeats ââ¬Å"Iââ¬â¢ll riseâ⬠throughout the poem, showing she has high hopes for herself. Towards the end of the poem, she starts to say ââ¬Å"I rise,â⬠which shows she is happy with how she is now, and possibly happy with the way people treat her. The point in this poem is to show that Maya had personal problems, but wanted to show she had enough inner strength to write about them, and that she wanted someone to listen to what she had to say. The way ââ¬ËI Shall Returnââ¬â¢ is written helps with how you interpret the poem. McKay wrote the poem in present tense ââ¬Å"To laugh and love and watch with wonder-eyesâ⬠, but explains his dreams in the future tense ââ¬Å"I Shall Return to hear the fiddle and fifeâ⬠. This makes it obvious that his dreams arenââ¬â¢t yet fulfilled, but he hopes they will eventually. The theme is clear all the way through the poem. He repeats ââ¬Å"I shall return, I shall return again,â⬠to show his desire to return to the place of his happy childhood memories. McKay idealised his childhood, he ignored any imperfections and suggests his childhood was perfect. When he went to America, he noticed how much people didnââ¬â¢t respect their life, but this just made him realise how much he had, and he just let it go. The repetition he uses in the poem emphasises his longing to make people appreciate what they have. Another of the main comparisons is that both poems are very personal; they decipher the poetsââ¬â¢ childhoods and longings in life. The poems uncover the poetsââ¬â¢ history, present livesââ¬â¢, and what they desire in the future. The poems both have pastoral and natural imagery amongst them, ââ¬Å"The forest fires burnâ⬠from ââ¬ËI Shall Return,ââ¬â¢ and ââ¬Å"Just like moons and sunsâ⬠from ââ¬ËStill I Rise.ââ¬â¢ This is a comparison; however, they explain them in a completely different context, Maya describing them as ââ¬Ëon her sideââ¬â¢ as she compares them with herself, turning the words into metaphors and using personification. Whereas McKay uses the natural imagery as a relaxing thing as he uses calm words such as ââ¬Ëloiterââ¬â¢ and ââ¬Ëbatheââ¬â¢ which makes this a contrasting point. The way the poets have done this is a brilliant way to get the poem flowing with different moods, whilst still getting their purpose across. Angelou talks in a relaxing style, but uses rhetorical questions. This makes her sound challenging and possibly even angry. McKay uses slight aggression and anger in ââ¬ËI shall return.ââ¬â¢ He uses bold imagery to do this. He also talks about natural things like ââ¬Å"forest fires burnâ⬠and ââ¬Å"blades of the bending grassesâ⬠and uses personification to make them seem like bad things, like blades of knives, and the burning of flames. However, he does also express his ââ¬Ëwashed awayââ¬â¢ feeling vaguely, ââ¬Å"â⬠¦the streams that bathe theâ⬠¦Ã¢â¬ shows he has a lot of respect for things that happen everyday and shows how much beauty they actually have. The poets make points and raise ideas about confidence whilst they talk about their childhood ââ¬Å"Did you want to see me broken?â⬠(ââ¬ËStill I Riseââ¬â¢) makes a point of something that hurt her in the past, but now she shows she has enough strength to ask those questions she always wanted to know. That is similar in both poems, but talk in completely different attitudes, whilst explaining similar things. In my opinion, both poems are equally as good. ââ¬ËStill I riseââ¬â¢ uses very strong metaphors to bring back how Maya feels about black female history. ââ¬Å"Iââ¬â¢m a black ocean, leaping and wide, welling and swellingâ⬠¦Ã¢â¬ is a brilliant phrase, using strong personification. A ââ¬Å"black oceanâ⬠takes the biggest thing on the planet, and uses black to make it seem mysterious. ââ¬Å"Welling and swellingâ⬠could be annotated in two different ways; that black history is becoming more recognised as a big thing, or, the ââ¬Å"welling and swellingâ⬠of a womanââ¬â¢s stomach when she is pregnant, emphasising the fact women play a big part in the world, that they are the ones who bring children into the world, and happiness. ââ¬ËI shall returnââ¬â¢ is short but to the point. Claude takes beautiful things and ââ¬Ëtwistsââ¬â¢ them, to make them seem they have a strong personality of their own. This poem is very effective with the way Claude uses very bold imagery. He takes things that people come across every day, but donââ¬â¢t take them into consideration in the way they should.
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